Suddenly there was absolute silence... (fiction)
This is one of my attempts at a fictional story... Enjoy the story!
It was a calm night here in Honeydew. There were clear
skies outside and little to no activity in the neighbourhood. I was in the
house alone (as usual). My parents always worked the night shift, so I always spent
the weeknights alone. I sat by the window, counting the stars while eating a
bowl of instant noodles.
It was not my first time spending the night alone. Ever
since 2019, when my parents got a new job, I have been left alone, so I was
used to it. However, what happened on that night I did not expect. I called it
a night at 11:04pm. I switched off the television and the lights and went to my
bedroom. I tucked myself into bed and scrolled through Instagram on my phone.
It takes me a while to fall asleep, so I spent quite a while on Instagram. As
the clock signalled the start of a new day (it was 12AM) I heard several loud
footsteps outside the house. I thought that it was just a couple of passers-by.
How wrong I was.
After several minutes, the footsteps stopped, awfully close
to the front door. Those “passers-by” were house robbers that were gathered
outside the house, arguing about something. I stood by my bedroom door trying
to listen to what they were arguing about. Suddenly there was absolute
silence. It got so quiet that my
ears started ringing. That eerie silence continued for a couple of minutes.
That silence was broken by the sound of glass shattering.
Scared, I tried finding a place big enough for me to hide,
as I had a feeling that those thieves were going to come into my room
inevitably. I found a spot in one of my cupboards. As the commotion continued
in the living room, I grabbed my beloved laptop and phone and took cover in the
cupboard. With my heart beating out of my chest, I waited anxiously for the
robbers to rummage through my bedroom.
After several minutes of vases braking and tools falling,
the crooks left the house, with only the television from the living room. Shaken, I got out of my hiding place to assess the damage by the robbers. Apart from a broken window, everything else was relatively unscathed... Considering how long those crooks took, that was pathetic… (I say this while I
was crying like a baby in the cupboard). Fortunately, our neighbours were
useful on this occasion. They managed to call the cops during the robbery, and they arrived at the scene of the time relatively quickly, and they apprehended the suspects.
Needs more creativity bro. But keep it up
ReplyDeleteNot too bad for a beginner. Don't stop till you get it right.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed it keep it up there's still more room for improvement ��
ReplyDeleteWoooooow creativity at its best Chana...... Well done
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